City Rain (by Moi! Inspired by my dear friend Max)

Cool wet rain on the streets below
filling, thrashing, tread splashing
pedestrians dashing
couples clashing
Wall Street crashing
concert goers mashing
ho's flashing
pimps cashing
homeless trashing
I feel the cool blue of my diamond ring
all my other bling
I know it ain't over till the fat lady sings!
(©2009 RayleneDeschenes)

My friend Max inspired this rap when he posted on his Facebook (12Jun09):
"Cool wet rain on the street below, filling, thrashing, tread splashing....." 
I think this would make a great Rap!  LOL!
I Love you and I miss you, Max!